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PostSubject: Potential Unleashed! Welcome to Hell. [P]   Wed Mar 14, 2018 11:58 am

It had been a tough few weeks for Bet. Ever since his big mission with Pigtail-chan and Hokage-sensei, he had been taking on more solo missions as they were both vusy with clan things. It had been going well, all things considered. He had completed a number of D and C-ranked missions and was currently in the middle of another C-rank. The only issue here, was that it had become more of a B-rank once he got into it. The leader of the bandits had proven much too strong for the young genin to handle on his own. In fact, he had been captured, but not before he took down a dozen of the bandits in the camp. He was currently trapped in a steel cage, feeling disappointed in himself for his overconfidence and his failure. Every now and then they would send a current of electricity through the cage, shocking him. Or they would douse him in water. He was becomming more and more aggrivated with each bandit that came in to have their fun with him. Each one only wanted to hurt him and break his will, to torture him without leaving visible scars. He had been beaten, electrocuted, burned, almost drowned and they definitely werent through with him yet. But, he had a sinking feeling that the worst was yet to come.

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PostSubject: Re: Potential Unleashed! Welcome to Hell. [P]   Wed Mar 14, 2018 12:59 pm

When the flap to his dark, candlelit tent opened again, he was greeted by a man wearing a hood. This man was obviously the leader that had defeated him before. He never got to see him, but he was still nursing the wound he recieved via a chop to the neck. The man removed his hood, revealing pure white eyes surrounded by black sclera. The eyes almost reminded him of the Hyuuga clan, but before he could formulate anymore thoughts his world swirled and faded to black. When he woke up, he was unsure of where he was exactly, until he saw the village. There he was, standing atop Hokage Mountain, atop the finished face of his sensei, looking down at a burning Konoha. He fell to his knees as he watched buildings collapse and he could hear people screaming in agony. He would then pass out from the strain the genjutsu had placed on him, but as far as his mind was aware, these bastards had burned his home to the ground. He woke up an hour later and actually wept within the walls of his cell. It was here that he vowed to get his revenge, on behalf of all of those in konoha who had lost their lives in that attack, though, unbeknownst to him, his village was fine.


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PostSubject: Re: Potential Unleashed! Welcome to Hell. [P]   Wed Mar 14, 2018 1:44 pm

He woke to an intense pain shooting through his body over and over again, almost rhythmically. His eyes snapping open and curling himself into a ball somewhat, he realized it was someone stomping on his tail in some evil attempt to wake him up through pain. The five bandits in the room then proceeded to taunt him and mock him for his tail and his obvious weakness. He then went through another day of torture. Today was less physical and more emotional and mental, though the physical aspect still remained. The main bandit, the one he was with before he saw his burned village was at the fotefront of it all as he was paraded around the camp, they threw rocks, stepped on his tail, shocked him with lightning element, it was almost more than he could take. His life had chamged so much in the last three days that he wasn't sure what to do anymore. His world had fallen apart and he had no one, nothing to return to. He thought of many things, his teammate, his teacher, his family, his friends, his guture, his father... it was all more than he could bear to lose. These bastards would pay.


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PostSubject: Re: Potential Unleashed! Welcome to Hell. [P]   Wed Mar 14, 2018 1:52 pm

Bet was back in his dark tent, no light this time as he sat and waited for the torture to commense. How could he be so weak to allow this to happen to him? How could he allow it? Was he really just some weakling who couldnt even protect the ones he loved? He couldn't stand for this! He was NOT weak! He could remember the lessons his father taught him about not only his own life, but also their clan. He was a WARRIOR by birth! He wouldn't allow them to tramp upon the ideals and memories of those he loved anymore. He was all he had left and he would be damned if they toom that from him too! When the flap opened again, he felt himself be consumed by rage as he saw the bandits leader entering with a smirk on his face. In Bets mind, he could almost see him with that same look as he burned Konoha to the ground. He felt the rage swell and then power came with it. He felt the power flow through his coils, nearly doubling his reserves, he felt himself grow stronger and then there was light in the darkness. A shining golden light as he let out an almost animalistic yell. He then grabbed the bars of the cage and began to pull.


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PostSubject: Re: Potential Unleashed! Welcome to Hell. [P]   Wed Mar 14, 2018 10:37 pm

Ripping the doors open, the now golden haired, blue eyed boy would punch the bandit leader hard enough to knock him out of the tent, and as fate would have it, he landed on the large bonfire the bandits had blazing. His screams alarmed the camp and it was time for the great escape and revenge to happen. He immediately set on the bandits around who were stunned by the sight of their dying leader. He used his afterimage ability to take them out quickly while making it difficult for them to pinpoint where exactly he was among them. He was also using some ki abilities that he had learned to take them out faster in groups. By the time he finished, the last bandit had begged for him to just bring him prisoner to Konoha to deal with a trial. This threw Bet for a loop and he paused before killing the man. It was obvious that he was telling the truth about returning to Konoha, so Bet did just that. And to his relief, his village was still standing! He took the time to stop by and check on all of his loved ones as he checked in to kage tower to leave his report. 


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