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PostSubject: Kozura's Tai Batch #1   Wed Jun 20, 2018 6:37 pm

Name: Wasp
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: Melee
Description: The user thrusts a single fingertip forward, enhancing it to make sure that the user doesn’t break his or her own finger against the object that they’re striking. The force is enough to create a hole in the object, if it’s weak enough, similar to a bullet wound (with the finger being the equivalent of the bullet).
+40 to speed and strength of the finger-jab. The user can spend 15 chakra when casting to coat the finger in a chakra spear, causing it to ignore 15 durability.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her


Name: Impact Wasp
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee
Description: A more focused version of Wasp, the user thrusts his fingertip forward as an empowered attack.
+60 to speed and strength of the finger-jab, and ignores 10 health. The user can spend 15 chakra when casting to coat the finger in a chakra spear, causing it to ignore 15 extra durability.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her


Name: Flying Wasp
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: 25 meters
Description: The user empowers their finger (+30 to speed and strength of the flick) and flicks. The resulting impact is strong enough to create a bullet of air that travels at the speed and strength of the flick until it hits an object or reaches the limit of its range. If an object has 20 or more health lower than the strength of the bullet, the bullet merely pierces through it unimpeded. The user can spend 15 chakra when casting to coat the finger in a chakra spear which shifts to the bullet, causing it to ignore 15 extra durability.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her


Name: Flying Impact Wasp
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:25 meters
Description: The user empowers their finger further (+50 to speed and strength of the flick), and flicks. The resulting impact is strong enough to create a bullet of air that travels at the speed and strength of the flick until it hits an object or reaches the limit of its range. If an object has 20 or more health lower than the strength of the bullet, the bullet merely pierces through it unimpeded.
Bullet ignores 10 health. The user can spend 15 chakra when casting to coat the finger in a chakra spear which shifts to the bullet, causing it to ignore 15 extra durability.
Requirements:Be Kozura/learn from her


Name: Queen Wasp
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee
Description: The user does a headbutt. While this doesn’t pierce like the other versions of Wasp, it does create a small 1-inch thick disk of impact force centered on the center of the forehead, or wherever the head makes contact with its target. The disk is 7 meters wide at maximum (can be smaller) allowing the user to use it to block spread jutsu and the like.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her


Name: Heaven-Piercing Wasp
Rank: A
Type:Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee
Description: This is the stepping stone from the traditional “Wasp”, the technique of the Western Nomads, to Kozura’s development of a greater power. The user extends a single finger, and focuses, preparing their next attack.
+60 speed and strength to next “Wasp” taijutsu. That taijutsu also ignores 10 more health.
Requirements:Be Kozura/learn from her, GM in taijutsu


Name: Destroying West Heaven: Yubisaki
Rank: S
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range: Melee/100 meters
Description: The user thrusts his finger forward in a typical “Wasp” attack, but the sheer power and taijutsu prowess allows the user to create two massive shockwaves at once (or one really weirdly shaped one, I guess), composed of a hemispherical impact, originating from the tip of the finger, 50 m in radius and a conical impact, extending 100 meters out and being 25 m wide at its greatest point.
The technique first enhances the speed and power of the thrust by 90 each, then the resulting impacts have speed and power of the thrust. Both thrust and impact ignore 20 health.
This counts as a “Wasp” technique.
Requirements:Be Kozura/learn from her, know Heaven-Piercing Wasp


Name: Beetle
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee
Description: The user performs a melee block/parry, reducing the strength of an incoming attack. For the purposes of the block alone, the part of the body that the user’s blocking with is treated as though its durability had been increased by 30.
If the user’s strength is more than 100 when the block is performed, the apparent buff is further increased to 40.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her


Name: Stag Beetle
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: Melee
Description: A higher form of the Beetle technique, Stag Beetle is a block specifically performed with some part of the user’s arm(s), hand(s), or finger(s). For the purposes of the block alone, the part of the body that the user’s blocking with is treated as though its durability had been increased by 60.
If the user’s strength is more than 100 when the block is performed, the apparent buff is further increased to 70.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her


Name: Hercules Beetle
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range: Melee
Description: A higher form of the Beetle technique, Stag Beetle is a block specifically performed with some part of the user’s leg(s), foot/feet, or toes. For the purposes of the block alone, the part of the body that the user’s blocking with is treated as though its durability had been increased by 60.
If the user’s strength is more than 100 when the block is performed, the apparent buff is further increased to 70.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her


Name: Scarab Beetle
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: Melee
Description: The user parries an attack with any/all of his body without hardly moving much at all, allowing him to seamlessly run through certain weaker attacks. For the purposes of the block alone, the user’s body is treated as though its durability had been increased by 45.
If the user’s strength is more than 100 when the block is performed, the apparent buff is further increased to 55.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her


Name: Heaven-Eating Beetle
Rank: A
Type:Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee
Description: This is the stepping stone from the traditional “Beetle”, the technique of the Western Nomads, to Kozura’s development of a greater power. The user takes up a slightly more compressed stance, preparing to block an attack.
The next “Beetle” taijutsu move the user casts has its apparent durability buff increased by 45. In addition, if the attack it blocks would ignore any amount of health (i.e. chidori), that numeral is reduced by 15.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her

Name: Destroying North Heaven: Reiketsu
Rank:S
Type:Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee/range of blocked attack
Description: The user performs a melee block/parry, reducing the strength of an incoming attack in a typical “Beetle” move. For the purposes of the block alone, the part of the body that the user’s blocking with is treated as though its durability had been increased by 90 (95 if the user’s strength is over 100 when the block is performed). However, upon doing so, the user counterattacks, reflecting the impact or attack back at its caster (or in any other direction, unless it's a non-solid chakra attack). Only works on attacks whose strength is equal or less than the user’s. If this is a melee attack, the reflection ignores 20 health.  
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her, know Heaven-Eating Beetle



Name: Scorpion
Rank:B
Type:Taijutsu
Element:-
Range: 50 meters
Description: The user performs a high-powered kick, increasing the speed and strength of the kick by 25, thus creating a sharp blade of pressure that travels to the end of its range. 5 m in length, the ranged Scorpion kick has a strength and speed equivalent to the user’s strength and speed.
After hitting an object, if the kick is aimed right, the user can have the pressure blade “bounce” once, sorta, moving in an entirely different direction from where it was before, as long as it remains in range.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her

Name: Sand Scorpion
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range: 60 meters
Description: The user performs a high-powered kick, increasing the speed and strength of the kick by 50, thus creating a sharp blade of pressure that travels to the end of its range. 7 m in length, the ranged Scorpion kick has a strength and speed equivalent to the user’s strength and speed.
After hitting an object, if the kick is aimed right, the user can have the pressure blade “bounce” once, sorta, moving in an entirely different direction from where it was before, as long as it remains in range.
Requirements: Be Kozura, learn from her

Name: Baby Scorpion
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: 55 meters
Description: The user performs a high-powered kick, increasing the speed and strength of the kick by 40, thus creating a sharp blade of pressure that travels to the end of its range. 5 m in length, the ranged Scorpion kick has a strength and speed equivalent to the user’s strength and speed.
After hitting an object, if the kick is aimed right, the user can have the pressure blade “bounce” once, sorta, moving in an entirely different direction from where it was before, as long as it remains in range.
A weaker version of Sand Scorpion, this technique has the unique aspect that the pressure blade can “bounce” one additional time after the first.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her

Name: Flat Scorpion
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: 65 meters
Description:
Looks kinda like this, but not visible :
 
The user performs a high-powered kick, increasing the speed and strength of the kick by 40, thus creating a sharp line of pressure that travels to the end of its range. 1 cm in thickness, the ranged Scorpion kick has a strength and speed equivalent to the user’s strength and speed.
After hitting an object, if the kick is aimed right, the user can have the pressure blade “bounce” once, sorta, moving in an entirely different direction from where it was before, as long as it remains in range.
A weaker version of Sand Scorpion, this technique has the unique aspect that the pressure blade can “bounce” one additional time after the first.
Requirements:Be Kozura/learn from her

Name: Heaven-Rending Scorpion
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Self
Description: This is the stepping stone from the traditional “Scorpion”, the technique of the Western Nomads, to Kozura’s development of a greater power. The user prepares a kick, determining the proper angle and power to throw it at.
The next “Scorpion” taijutsu move the user casts has its speed and strength increased by 60 each. In addition, it can bounce one extra time.

Requirements:Be Kozura/learn from her

N.B. Destroying East Heaven and the last of the four styles hasn't been completed by the character IC yet, which is why this looks like it's a stub


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PostSubject: Re: Kozura's Tai Batch #1   Wed Jun 20, 2018 9:15 pm

Kozai wrote:
Name: Wasp
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: Melee
Description: The user thrusts a single fingertip forward, enhancing it to make sure that the user doesn’t break his or her own finger against the object that they’re striking. The force is enough to create a hole in the object, if it’s weak enough, similar to a bullet wound (with the finger being the equivalent of the bullet).
+40 to speed and strength of the finger-jab.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her


Name: Impact Wasp
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee
Description: A more focused version of Wasp, the user thrusts his fingertip forward as an empowered attack.
+60 to speed and strength of the finger-jab, and ignores 25 health.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her




Name: Flying Wasp
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: 25 meters
Description: The user empowers their finger (+30 to speed and strength of the flick) and flicks. The resulting impact is strong enough to create a bullet of air that travels at the speed and strength of the flick until it hits an object or reaches the limit of its range. If an object has 20 or more health lower than the strength of the bullet, the bullet merely pierces through it unimpeded.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her




Name: Flying Impact Wasp
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:25 meters
Description: The user empowers their finger further (+50 to speed and strength of the flick), and flicks. The resulting impact is strong enough to create a bullet of air that travels at the speed and strength of the flick until it hits an object or reaches the limit of its range. If an object has 20 or more health lower than the strength of the bullet, the bullet merely pierces through it unimpeded.
Bullet ignores 15 health.
Requirements:Be Kozura/learn from her




Name: Queen Wasp
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee
Description: The user does a headbutt. While this doesn’t pierce like the other versions of Wasp, it does create a small 1-inch thick disk of impact force centered on the center of the forehead, or wherever the head makes contact with its target. The disk is 7 meters wide at maximum (can be smaller) allowing the user to use it to block spread jutsu and the like.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her




Name: Heaven-Piercing Wasp
Rank: A
Type:Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee
Description: This is the stepping stone from the traditional “Wasp”, the technique of the Western Nomads, to Kozura’s development of a greater power. The user extends a single finger, and focuses, preparing their next attack.
+60 speed and strength to next “Wasp” taijutsu. That taijutsu also ignores 30 health.
Requirements:Be Kozura/learn from her, GM in taijutsu

The stat boost of this tech needs to be significantly lower. You can lower the rank reqs of the tech if you must, but considering most of your other "wasp" techs already do such high potential damage, this would be insane. Also the amount of health its ignoring is insane for a basic taijutsu maneuver. It needs an element, preferably lightning, in order to have such a powerful durability ignoring effect.


Name: Destroying West Heaven: Yubisaki
Rank: S
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range: Melee/100 meters
Description: The user thrusts his finger forward in a typical “Wasp” attack, but the sheer power and taijutsu prowess allows the user to create two massive shockwaves at once (or one really weirdly shaped one, I guess), composed of a hemispherical impact, originating from the tip of the finger, 50 m in radius and a conical impact, extending 100 meters out and being 25 m wide at its greatest point.
The technique first enhances the speed and power of the thrust by 90 each, then the resulting impacts have speed and power of the thrust. Both thrust and impact ignore 35 health.
This counts as a “Wasp” technique.
Requirements:Be Kozura/learn from her, know Heaven-Piercing Wasp

Making sure I understand this, it just gets a base +90 to speed and strength?

Name: Beetle
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee
Description: The user performs a melee block/parry, reducing the strength of an incoming attack. For the purposes of the block alone, the part of the body that the user’s blocking with is treated as though its durability had been increased by 30.
If the user’s strength is more than 100 when the block is performed, the apparent buff is further increased to 40.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her

Id ask you to reword the "If the user’s strength is more than 100 when the block is performed, the apparent buff is further increased to 40" bit. This doesnt really work with our stats that now have a comparison to go off of. So, you could say if you braced yourself a post before, then it could be treated as though the durability is +40 or whatever, but just because your strength is high, doesn't necessarily mean your durability should be increased.


Name: Stag Beetle
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: Melee
Description: A higher form of the Beetle technique, Stag Beetle is a block specifically performed with some part of the user’s arm(s), hand(s), or finger(s). For the purposes of the block alone, the part of the body that the user’s blocking with is treated as though its durability had been increased by 60.
If the user’s strength is more than 100 when the block is performed, the apparent buff is further increased to 70.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her

Same as above.


Name: Hercules Beetle
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range: Melee
Description: A higher form of the Beetle technique, Stag Beetle is a block specifically performed with some part of the user’s leg(s), foot/feet, or toes. For the purposes of the block alone, the part of the body that the user’s blocking with is treated as though its durability had been increased by 60.
If the user’s strength is more than 100 when the block is performed, the apparent buff is further increased to 70.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her

Same as above


Name: Scarab Beetle
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: Melee
Description: The user parries an attack with any/all of his body without hardly moving much at all, allowing him to seamlessly run through certain weaker attacks. For the purposes of the block alone, the user’s body is treated as though its durability had been increased by 45.
If the user’s strength is more than 100 when the block is performed, the apparent buff is further increased to 55.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her

Same as above


Name: Heaven-Eating Beetle
Rank: A
Type:Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee
Description: This is the stepping stone from the traditional “Beetle”, the technique of the Western Nomads, to Kozura’s development of a greater power. The user takes up a slightly more compressed stance, preparing to block an attack.
The next “Beetle” taijutsu move the user casts has its apparent durability buff increased by 45. In addition, if the attack it blocks would ignore any amount of health (i.e. chidori), that numeral is reduced by 15.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her

Okay, lower the buff increase and id ask to lower the decrease it imposes on other jutsu, as the one listed is a limited and that would lower it to half the amount it normally deals. So just lower those numbers a bit.

Name: Destroying North Heaven: Reiketsu
Rank:S
Type:Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Melee/range of blocked attack
Description: The user performs a melee block/parry, reducing the strength of an incoming attack in a typical “Beetle” move. For the purposes of the block alone, the part of the body that the user’s blocking with is treated as though its durability had been increased by 90 (95 if the user’s strength is over 100 when the block is performed). However, upon doing so, the user counterattacks, reflecting the impact or attack back at its caster (or in any other direction, even if it’s a chakra attack). Only works on attacks whose strength is equal or less than the user’s. If this is a melee attack, the reflection ignores 20 health.  
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her, know Heaven-Eating Beetle

So looks good, other than the whole "strength over 100" thing i mentioned in the earlier techs and the durability ignoring that I mentioned for your wasp attacks to include a lightning element. Also, a base Taijutsu attack shouldn't be able to deflect a fire ball or a bolt of lightning, even if it is S-rank lol. So, id suggest adding a specific element to the jutsu and it can be able to deflect that and whatever is weak to that element, or something else.


Name: Scorpion
Rank:B
Type:Taijutsu
Element:-
Range: 50 meters
Description: The user performs a high-powered kick, increasing the speed and strength of the kick by 25, thus creating a sharp blade of pressure that travels to the end of its range. 5 m in length, the ranged Scorpion kick has a strength and speed equivalent to the user’s strength and speed.
After hitting an object, if the kick is aimed right, the user can have the pressure blade “bounce” once, sorta, moving in an entirely different direction from where it was before, as long as it remains in range.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her

Name: Sand Scorpion
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range: 60 meters
Description: The user performs a high-powered kick, increasing the speed and strength of the kick by 50, thus creating a sharp blade of pressure that travels to the end of its range. 7 m in length, the ranged Scorpion kick has a strength and speed equivalent to the user’s strength and speed.
After hitting an object, if the kick is aimed right, the user can have the pressure blade “bounce” once, sorta, moving in an entirely different direction from where it was before, as long as it remains in range.
Requirements: Be Kozura, learn from her

Name: Baby Scorpion
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: 55 meters
Description: The user performs a high-powered kick, increasing the speed and strength of the kick by 40, thus creating a sharp blade of pressure that travels to the end of its range. 5 m in length, the ranged Scorpion kick has a strength and speed equivalent to the user’s strength and speed.
After hitting an object, if the kick is aimed right, the user can have the pressure blade “bounce” once, sorta, moving in an entirely different direction from where it was before, as long as it remains in range.
A weaker version of Sand Scorpion, this technique has the unique aspect that the pressure blade can “bounce” one additional time after the first.
Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her

Name: Flat Scorpion
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: 65 meters
Description:
Looks kinda like this, but not visible :
 
The user performs a high-powered kick, increasing the speed and strength of the kick by 40, thus creating a sharp line of pressure that travels to the end of its range. 1 cm in thickness, the ranged Scorpion kick has a strength and speed equivalent to the user’s strength and speed.
After hitting an object, if the kick is aimed right, the user can have the pressure blade “bounce” once, sorta, moving in an entirely different direction from where it was before, as long as it remains in range.
A weaker version of Sand Scorpion, this technique has the unique aspect that the pressure blade can “bounce” one additional time after the first.
Requirements:Be Kozura/learn from her

Name: Heaven-Rending Scorpion
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element:-
Range:Self
Description: This is the stepping stone from the traditional “Scorpion”, the technique of the Western Nomads, to Kozura’s development of a greater power. The user prepares a kick, determining the proper angle and power to throw it at.
The next “Scorpion” taijutsu move the user casts has its speed and strength increased by 60 each. In addition, it can bounce one extra time.

Requirements:Be Kozura/learn from her


Lower the added stat boost a smidge.

N.B. Destroying East Heaven and the last of the four styles hasn't been completed by the character IC yet, which is why this looks like it's a stub



Overall Note: I have no problems with techniques that "ignore" durability, but they should include an element or something to give them a piercing quality. An example would be lightning or wind natures. Also id say like 25 is the max id allow a non limited, A-rank to ignore. Given the only example's, other than Hyuuga who are special cases, that I can think of for this ability would be chidori and raikiri and possibly the hell stab which are all limiteds and have a lightning nature.
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PostSubject: Re: Kozura's Tai Batch #1   Thu Jun 21, 2018 2:00 pm

Edited stuff, discorded some other stuff
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PostSubject: Re: Kozura's Tai Batch #1   Thu Jun 21, 2018 7:10 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kozura's Tai Batch #1   Wed Jul 18, 2018 3:14 pm

Name: Destroying East Heaven: Totsuzen
Rank:S
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Range: 100 m
Description: The user performs a kick and sends out a line of force similar to Flat Scorpion. This kick is enhanced by 100 speed and strength, and the speed/power of the ranged attack carries the speed and power of the kick. After hitting an object, if the kick is aimed right, the user can have the pressure shot “bounce” once, sorta, moving in an entirely different direction from where it was before, as long as it remains in range.
This technique can bounce up to two times. However, each time it bounces, it splits, creating another force line originating from the point where it bounces that carries the characteristics of the original (including how many bounces it has remaining). While only the original can split (the new shots cannot create further copies), none of the splits cost chakra.

Requirements: Be Kozura/learn from her, Know Heaven-Rending Scorpion
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