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 Kozue Tech Batch #1

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PostSubject: Kozue Tech Batch #1    Tue Nov 14, 2017 2:39 pm

Name:Air Mine
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Range: 20 meters
Description: A simple yet versatile technique, the user claps their hands together then forms a small pocket of chakra between them. This tiny (1 cm diameter), invisible bubble of ionized gas (essentially, flame) the user then releases, and directs it around within the range around the user. Upon the user's will, the user can remotely detonate it (explosion has a radius of 2 meters).
Requirements:Fire element, learn from Kozue


Name:Active Air Mine
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Range: 40 meters
Description: The user creates several (up to 15) stationary 8.5 inch diameter fire orbs within the jutsu radius. On the first post, they do nothing, not even having sufficient fuel to burn or explode. However, on the second post, they absorb small quantities of air around them and cloak, turning invisible. If a living being comes into contact with one of these orbs (other than the user), that orb detonates (3 meter radius explosion). The user can cast this jutsu again prematurely to add to the number of orbs (as long as the number doesn't go over the cap of 15). The user may detonate and dispel the orbs as he or she pleases.
Requirements: Fire element, learn from Kozue


Name: Yellow Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Description: The user surrounds her hand in a swath of yellow lightning to use as a cutter, similar to a chakra scalpel or the like. Since it surrounds the hand, it has a slight defensive option as well. Unlike most other abilities of the same type, it doesn't ignore any defense or have any perks other than "it's sharp and it hurts things".
Requirements:Lightning element, learn from Kozue


Name: Yellow Lightning: Hiken
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: 3 meters
Description: This merely extends the Yellow Lightning cutter to a 3 meter blade of about 6 inches in width, while making it stronger and sharper. (A-rank jutsu, rather than B-rank). The user can shorten this blade and lengthen it (up to 3 meters) as she pleases.
Requirements:Learn from Kozue


Name: Spirit Drain Seal
Rank:A
Type:Fuuin
Element:-
Range:Touch
Description: Upon physical contact with anything that has chakra, the user begins to spread a sealing formula over the victim, spreading outward from and connecting to the spot of contact. As long as touch is maintained, the user may drain 50 chakra from the victim.
Requirements: Learn from Kozue
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PostSubject: Re: Kozue Tech Batch #1    Tue Nov 14, 2017 5:18 pm

4/5 APPROVED.


Spirit Drain Seal: Upon physical contact with anything that has chakra, the user begins to spread a sealing formula over the victim, spreading outward from and connecting to the spot of contact. As long as touch is maintained, the user may drain 50 chakra from the victim.

I only point out the italicised part due to being a bit hard to visualise and I don't know if you mean something like the formula emerges, wraps around their body in a loop before joining back or something, mainly just an issue that might leave people not knowing how to respond to it since it does seem a bit off. The underlined part however is alright you don't specify if that goes on every post that touch is maintained but it gives that impression with "As long as touch is maintained again" but just another thing that seems a bit cryptic.
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PostSubject: Re: Kozue Tech Batch #1    Wed Nov 15, 2017 2:40 pm

I'm talking like a sealing formula that spreads out from the hand, like the thingy that appears whenever a character uses the summoning technique.
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