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PostSubject: Re: Tokage Clan   Thu Jan 25, 2018 10:27 am

1. As far as the poison resistance, please use one full rank & not percentages.

2. Sail Wing Jutsu- We use posts to mark time, not minutes or hours.

3. Venom Fang Technique- Your clan mentions nothing about using poison, only resisting it. To use poison, a shinobi must have adequate skill in medical ninjutsu.

4. Breath Release- First you say the users cannot breathe solid elements like wood & steel, but then at the bottom you say they can IF they figure out a way to do it. This is conflicting and slightly misleading. The pretense being that they cannot, however when apped anyone could use those solid elements in jutsu format. Please choose whether yes or no on this.

5. King Lizard Natural Reversion- Just no. You already have a KKG about a body that is less human and more lizard. Taking this a step further makes your clan seem more like Bijuu/Jinchuurikis than anything. I fyou want plausibility with this, you need to go back to your clan's history roots and incorporate that Senjutsu chakra that made them like this in the first place. Suggestion, make this jutsu a Sage Mode technique.
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PostSubject: Re: Tokage Clan   Thu Jan 25, 2018 2:49 pm

Your King Lizard technique still needs discussed. As a Senjutsu transformation with Non-Summoning Sage Mode, you get a higher stat boost than what you currently have listed in the transformation. My suggestion is to leave the King Lizard technique as an advanced tranformation technique unique to your clan but only capable with Senjutsu chakra- thus also granting you the appropriate boost associated with Sage Mode. The base stats would be the shinobi's stats+Sage Mode. Because otherwise you are asking for a transformation buff to be added on top of another transformation buff. Stat boosts dont stack like this.
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PostSubject: Re: Tokage Clan   Thu Jan 25, 2018 7:28 pm

Not necessary, just trying to help you maximize benefit. Approved.
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